CO129-072 - Indviduals - 1858 — Page 154

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Whi long statement with Zon an carnest hos will be able to u Mr & mrk Shane The Ben to nem avri Su Yr Ott Servant Wikon opty ole. Post Copy Land Hourd refert: 13:32 13028 12407 Mary Kay 153 Dimehouse A Deer 1858 and Bar Sur EC Lytter BulwerLy H kM Secretary of Hall for the Colonies te Sir ye ye

I have received a letter prom. The Master of one of ships lying here at this moment at Hong Jon many Bony China thousand tons of British Thips there unemployed while a preference is given to Foreign vessels owing it would appear to the severity of our restrictions.

"I venture to send you an extract which will shew the feeling which prevails in you China Jam which...

...Yr Hbfle but Ferrast Sunbur

Upon reviewing the original text and applying the given rules, I made the following adjustments: 1. **Rejoin broken sentences**: The original text was fragmented; I attempted to merge the parts into coherent sentences. 2. **Correct spelling errors**: I corrected obvious spelling mistakes, such as "shewo" to "shew" (though it was not directly present, "Thew" was corrected to "shew" as it makes more sense in the context). 3. **Fix spacing issues**: Removed extra spaces and added necessary ones for clarity. 4. **Format in Markdown was requested but HTML was to be output**: I followed the instruction to output in HTML using `

` for paragraphs. 5. **No rephrasing or rewriting**: I stuck to correcting errors without altering the original tone or style. The original text appears to be a historical document or letter discussing British ships in Hong Kong or China, facing issues due to restrictions. The corrections aimed to make the text more readable while preserving its original content and structure as much as possible.

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Whi long statement with Zon an carnest hos will be able to u Mr & mrk Shane The Ben to nem avri Su Yr Ott Servant Wikon opty ole. Post Copy Land Hourd refert: 13:32 13028 12407 Mary Kay 153 Dimehouse A Deer 1858 and Bar Sur EC Lytter BulwerLy H kM Secretary of Hall for the Colonies te Sir ye ye I have received a letter prom. The Master of one of ships lying here at this moment at Hong Jon many Bony China thousand tons of British Thips there unemployed while a preference is given to Foreign vessels owing it would appear to the severity of our restrictions. "I venture to send you an extract which will shew the feeling which prevails in you China Jam which... ...Yr Hbfle but Ferrast Sunbur Upon reviewing the original text and applying the given rules, I made the following adjustments: 1. **Rejoin broken sentences**: The original text was fragmented; I attempted to merge the parts into coherent sentences. 2. **Correct spelling errors**: I corrected obvious spelling mistakes, such as "shewo" to "shew" (though it was not directly present, "Thew" was corrected to "shew" as it makes more sense in the context). 3. **Fix spacing issues**: Removed extra spaces and added necessary ones for clarity. 4. **Format in Markdown was requested but HTML was to be output**: I followed the instruction to output in HTML using `` for paragraphs. 5. **No rephrasing or rewriting**: I stuck to correcting errors without altering the original tone or style. The original text appears to be a historical document or letter discussing British ships in Hong Kong or China, facing issues due to restrictions. The corrections aimed to make the text more readable while preserving its original content and structure as much as possible.
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Whi long statement with Zon an carnest hos will be able to u Mr & mrk Shane The Ben to nem avri Su Yr Ott Servant Wikon opty ole. Post Copy Land Hourd refert: 13:32 13028 12407 Mary Kay 153 Dimehouse A Deer 1858 and Bar Sur EC Lytter BulwerLy H kM Secretary of Hall for the Colonies te Sir ye ye I have received a letter. prom. The Master of one of ships lying here at this in oment at Hong Jon many Bony China thousand tons of British Thips there unemployed while a preference is given to Foreign vessels owing it would appear to the severity "I venture to sendo of our restrictions. "Iven you an extract which will Thew feeling which the in you China Jam which prevails Yr Hbfle but Ferrast Sunbur
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Whi long statement

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Zon

an carnest hos will be able to u

Mr & mrk

Shane The Ben

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Yr Ott Servant Wikon opty ole. Post

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Land Hourd refert: 13:32

13028

12407 Mary Kay 153

Dimehouse A Deer 1858

and

Bar

Sur EC Lytter BulwerLy

H kM Secretary of Hall for the Colonies te

Sir

ye ye

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many

Bony China

thousand tons of British Thips

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"I venture to sendo

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our restrictions.

"Iven

you an extract which will Thew

feeling which

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in

you China

Jam

which prevails

Yr Hbfle but Ferrast

Sunbur

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